Anyone Interested In Writing A Commission Story?

[nimrod2710]

Hi All,
I'd like to commission a story about a female vs female deathfight held in an arena. Anyone interested?

Cheers,
Nimrod

[Felix_Gato]

Before attempting such a work, you would have to provide many more details of importance to you. Who are the fighters? What do they look like? Why are they fighting? Are they using weapons? What outfits should they wear? Who (if anyone) is in attendance? Is this an indoors arena, or outdoors? What is the season? What is the time of day? So many possibilities...

[MikeJV]

Ditto on what Felix said, I've written severla 'arena' stroies for forums and price requests, but efore agreeing to anything I'd haveto atleast know if this is modern or ancient times, and a basic descrip of the fighters, by PM if needed for any reason.

Mike

[nimrod2710]

Hi Mike & Felix,
Thanks for your responses. Regarding further details of the commission story, below is an overview - but I should emphasize that I am quite flexible on the content and very open to ideas.

I would very much appreciate your thoughts and ideas, and it would be great if you are able to write the story for me.

Thanks & Regards,
Leigh

Story Overview

The central theme of the story I have in mind is a TV show called the ?Beat The Gladiatrix Show?. In this highly popular show, which takes place in an arena before a large and enthusiastic live audience, young women volunteer to fight professional female fighters (known as gladiatrixes) to the death. If a young female volunteer beats her gladiatrix opponent, she earns a big prize (eg $100,000).

The gladiatrixes who fight in the show are professional fighters, and all of them are very fierce and aggressive. In their twenties, they are all very shapely, athletic and hardbodied. A highly entertaining feature of the show is that all the gladiator girls fight naked, except for their high heeled boots or shoes. All the gladiatrixes sport a thick bush of pubic hair in their crotch ? and if a gladiatrix is beaten, her pubic hair is presented in a silver cup to the young lady who has killed her, as a coveted victory trophy.

There are six death fights in a typical Show. After the third match there is a half-time interval, during which there is light entertainment. This includes an entertaining contest in which a member of the audience is invited into the arena to try to kill a young woman in a ?Death Game?, cheered on by the crowd. The Show?s Cheerleaders then entertain the crowd with a lively floor dance. The fourth match then resumes after the interval.

Throughout the Show, the audience is entertained by a highly entertaining Mistress Of Ceremonies, a middle-aged lady with blonde hair tied into a bun, who introduces the fighters and adds witty commentary as the contests get underway. Before each fight, pre-fight interviews with the contestants, and their pre-fight warm-up routines, are broadcast on a large video screen overlooking the arena. The gladiator girls are naked throughout their pre-fight interviews and ?flexy? warm-up routines. Losers are dragged from the arena feet first.

The producers of the Beat The Gladiatrix Show like to introduce new themes for the contests, and this story describes a very special and unique show: a Swordfighting Extravaganza in which all the volunteer fighters are teenage, sixthform schoolgirls. The schoolgirl team is an all-blonde team ? and so to add to the entertainment of the contests, they are pitted against an all-brunette team of gladiatrixes. (One idea I have for this story that all the volunteer schoolgirls are from the "Matadora Fighting School" for young ladies. The School Headmistress proudly volunteers six of her best teenage fighters, to be pitted in swordfights to the death against the ferocious gladiator girls).

All the gladiatrixes fight naked, their hard, lithe bodies well oiled for the contests, while the teenage schoolgirls wear their standard school gym kit ? white vest, short white skirt and pumps.

The heroine of this story is one of the six schoolgirls - a tiny blonde called Little Mo. Well under five feet tall and very slim and dainty, Little Mo is a sweet-looking teenager with her pretty blonde hair tied into a ponytail. Her sweet looks are, however, deceiving, for Little Mo is a sensational swordswoman who is already famous. Little Mo is the youngest ever contestant to be pitted against a gladiatrix on the Show. The opportunity to watch this dazzling little blonde fight a professional gladiatrix to the death in the arena has drawn a sell-out crowd and international TV coverage.

The Games commence with an opening ceremony, in which the six teenage volunteer contestants enter the arena in a row, holding their rapier swords. The six naked gladiator girls march in a row immediately behind the schoolgirls, also holding their rapier swords. Each gladiator girl marches behind the schoolgirl she will fight to the death. Little Mo is in the centre of the row, smiling sweetly. A rousing march accompanies the contestants as they march around the ring, and then to the centre of the arena. The Mistress of Ceremonies makes an opening speech.

In the six swordfights which follow, all six schoolgirls win a stunning victory, killing their gladiatrix opponent. A huge cheer goes up from the crowd as each gladiatrix cries out in agony, skewered on her opponent?s sword, then staggers and finally crashes to the ground, beaten. Each of the schoolgirl victors receives a thunderous standing ovation from the delighted crowd as she stomps the beaten gladiatrix and then parades the arena in victory.

Little Mo, the youngest ever schoolgirl competitor, is the climax of the show and fights last. Cheered on by the crowd, she defeats a particularly ferocious gladiatrix with short black hair with a devastating sword thrust through her stomach, driven right in to the hilt, a good three inches below the navel. The ecstatic crowd is so delighted that they demand an encore. A seventh gladiatrix with long black hair is then pitted against the sensational little blonde. Little Mo beats her too, killing the gladiatrix with a sword thrust driven in to the hilt at exactly the same spot ? deep down below the navel. With two gladiatrixes spreadeagled on the sandy arena floor, beaten, Little Mo wins a sensational double victory, and parades the arena to a thunderous standing ovation from the delighted crowd.